empty
you're so empty from me
shame has over come of what we use to be
you're voice ECHOES loudly in your empty head
but i cant hear cause only tears i shed
all you do is loaf around in your pride
I still cant believe how well you lied
although my love for you is still there
I wish it could go away cause its not like you care
I'll never move on I'll stay here in pain
hearing your empty voice swallowed in rain
by:keymani boudreaux
Good work with the rhyme and rhythm! It seems like you were a little unsure with the first couple of lines, but really started to develop the poem in the third line. I think that it's great, and want to see you do more!
ReplyDelete-Miss Molly