Tuesday, October 13, 2009

empty

you're so empty from me

shame has over come of what we use to be

you're voice ECHOES loudly in your empty head

but i cant hear cause only tears i shed

all you do is loaf around in your pride

I still cant believe how well you lied

although my love for you is still there

I wish it could go away cause its not like you care

I'll never move on I'll stay here in pain

hearing your empty voice swallowed in rain

by:keymani boudreaux

1 comment:

  1. Good work with the rhyme and rhythm! It seems like you were a little unsure with the first couple of lines, but really started to develop the poem in the third line. I think that it's great, and want to see you do more!

    -Miss Molly

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